Something is really tealling me I am doing something wrong, so I would love to hear any pointers. I need to finish this pic before this Thursday. Every help would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks to I managed to do some suggested adjustements. Is there anything else that could be fixed before coloring?
EDIT: With even more help from FlightySpirit managed to make some fixes. Tried to follow the changes as better as I could. Also took time to add colors. Is there anything that should be changed?